Art is good, but damn, dude, please, search for some music, dont just take it from other projects (especially their main themes!), and dont place them at the beginning of the game either!

I hope you asked for permission to use that journal...it was really not necessary to even use it, just an option in the menu was enough.

Music when you first go into class (toyshouse) is too distracting from reading (starting from 59th second).

The dude have phenomenal memory to remember 8 girls names and know who is who, Especially inder stress. Either out guy is a genious or there is something otherworldly in play. Or maybe he looked in the journal, sure (no journal in sight though).

And damn first days fly fast. For a dude who wanted to run away from a routine he sure got into another one pretty fast (well, thats a bit of nirpicking though). In my eyes its pretty much missed opportunity to explore how it goes, what he do at home and other such stuff, to "skip" it in later days. Maybe he dine with his sister in the afternoon and then plays on PC until its time to go to bed? Stuff like that.

Text overall is, even if short, writted quite great. I really hope you yourself know what exactly is "going on" with the abnormalities and not just inserting "weird things that happen", though the lunatism one was awesome. I mean, the thing that he actually gone into the bathroom to stay under the shower, that is somehow affect him and stuff.

Fix music ASAP, I can't stress it enough.