So far so good, the story is solid and well-written, and it has a ton of humor mixed with seriousness helping the reader feel compelled to keep playing, in my opinion, those reasons are enough to give this game a try. While the pacing is slow I understand it and it didn't bother me at all. I think stories should never be rushed, take all the time that you need to "tell" something, if you rush stuff you might not have the chance to do it in the future, make this a unique opportunity instead of a generic game like the million others out there.

It's a solid game without an inch of a doubt, I found myself reading everything and also paying attention to the character's expression, that's something not a lot of renpy games do, so, please keep it that way, your characters are unique in every possible way and by giving them life it makes the experience 100 times better.

Take your time and keep doing what you have been doing so far, don't rush it, and remember that "it's a marathon not a sprint", it's a really good game with tons of potential, unique and charismatic are the best words to describe this project.

Godspeed to you dev, my best wishes to you and everybody else involved in this project, keep up the good work.