10/10 - Great read, loved it. Sprites, CGs, writing quality were exceptionally high quality. The chemistry between all of the characters were fantastic and felt quite realistic. My only gripe is that I want more content lmao. Seriously, I wish the relationship between Elijah & Tremor was more fleshed out and we got to see their relationship develop more naturally rather than having a two week time skip. I understand it would have taken significantly longer to write & you wanted a short project which is probably why you opted not to, but you built up such a nice world I really wish you took advantage of it. Either way, love the VN I hope you consider making a longer one in the future.
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