Overall:
Well, I don't know what to say. I honestly don't understand what I just witnessed but I'm not sure if it is because it was intended or just because everything was too random.
I'm not sure if that was the intended feeling that your art was supposed to give but regarding the way you arranged colors together and the textures you used looked... weird. In the game, the Garden had a nice effect but, I think it would have been better with proper art and color arrangement. The relaxing land also seemed interesting.
Feedback (to go even further beyond!!!):
Everyone doesn't appreciate Art the same way so, my comments might not be relevant for everyone regarding this matter... but a more serious one though: the mouse. I have 2 screens and it's annoying to see the mouse get out of the game to go inside my other screen while I'm playing just because it's not locked when you're inside the window. I think you probably did that to allow interactions like clicking on the message box you left here and there to switch between scenes but to be fair, I think having a key like 'E' for interactions would have been a better fit, or even the mouse click since it doesn't have any other use case.
Last word:
My comments might be raw but I'm really not trying to offend you in any way. I just want to be honest about what I thought when I first saw your game for you to improve in your next project. If I praise your game while I didn't like, it's like I'm encouraging you towards the wrong path and if I leave without saying anything, it's like I'm looking at you go downhill I just decide to ignore it. Feedback is essential for progress so, I really hope you don't take my words the hard way and instead try to figure out why I felt the way I did. You've probably spent a lot of time working on this project so, I salute your hard work! And I wish that you can do even better next time! Good Luck! 💪
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