Up until now the VN is basically perfect. 

Thr writing, the backgrounds, the sprites, their expressions, the sfx, the bgm, everything work and blend really well together, making Unveiling such a high quality VN, with an awesome feel/vibe to it.

But I do have a complaint, the "horny" feels kinda out of place. It comes crashing down out of nowhere, and with such high intensity too, that it threw me out of the loop when it happened. I understand the situation was a good time to include some horniness to deal with the thirst of some readers, but that much focus and spotlight wasn't completely necessary. 

It feels like the story the good writing is simply thrown out of the window when something that out of tune with the vibe happens.