Stunning start for a first build. The art style is lovely, the background have in my opinion the same vibe as in fbtw (even though we are talking about fururistic sceneries) and the flow of the story is well guided. I hate when stories are going to fast because the writer doesn't feel like describing enought to get into the story. I hate it even more when the typo look too childish or is outright filled to the brim with errors. It juste makes it impossible for me to get into the story.

I Never encountered this problem during my playthrought and it is DAMN satisfying. (Well to be fair, there WAS a few errors; but minors and Frankly not that noticable.

Good job 👍