Overall:

Man, that game was good. 👏👏👏

The pixel art is 10/10 no joke and the pace of the story was wonderful. To top it off, a very nice choice of soundtrack to set the mood inside this story. 🥸

About the pace, during the 1st story for example, I really appreciated the way you first have to look through all the room to find the things required to prepare before Patrick comes around. This is a nice way of getting more familiar with the whole place and understanding what each item does. By the time he came, I already felt like "I know the place" which is a very good point. 

I must admit that as a straight man, I did cringe a little here and there during the 1st story but still, regardless of my personal beliefs, I have to admit that it was indeed an interesting story. 👍

Feedback (to go even further beyond!!!):

To be honest, I really don't have much to say... the game was very good at everything it was trying to achieve. A very nice experience.

If I could change one thing though, it'll be the walk speed.... because them these guys are slow. 🤣

Other than that, I don't see anything else that deserves revisions...

Last word:

An amazing experience. Props to you guys! Keep up the good work! 👌