I liked the game but I will say this again... art, dialogue and pricing need some work for sure. I could say as well that this game is better than Mini Game 009: The New Guy. This one has more scenes at least but other than that so much need to be worked on. Please don't take my rating as a disencouragment I will support your work as long as you try and improve :) thank you very much for all the work you have done so far.
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