Tested Version / 0.4.91
3/5 Star (i must give it such a low rating since i do want to rate it based on what it is not what i will become i will adjust this if it gets updates. Also the Story part is not finisched so it hard to rate overall but i Still want to support the work in any way i can.)
So far i really liked the game, but since it seems to be verry early in the development it a bit hard to say how it will go on. But it has some real potential in my opinion.
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keep in mind that i do not have much exerience with this kind of game with my following crtic
I start with some minor isuses i had. The money gathering in any screen does seem out of place at this point since i did not found a benefit for doing so. (probartly due to the early dev-stage) Not gamebreaking but it tooked me away from the story which i enjoyed.
Also some of the dialouge choice did not really sound different but had a big impact on the way the story plays out.
an example pretty early is that i dont see much of a difference between "menacing" and "intimidating" ( iam native german and it both sounds pretty agressive) Maybe thats normal for this genre since you need to splitt up paths, but it doesn looked like areal choice at this moment.
And the music was not really working all the time annd did not stiked well at this version
But now for good Stuff
I really liked the narrative and the more serios themes the start to takle. Yeah its a adult game but it does it well to not just make it into a fuckfantasy.
My first round realy fellt like a growing young adault relationship because i took it serious and did not look at it as a simple porn game. So thumbs up on that for respeckting their charaters so far.
Also playing the available paths was nice for getting a good view and better undeerstaning for the Story and characters
The art Style was very pretty and i had some good laughs.
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This game has some potential and it reminded me a little bit on my time many years ago with Katawa Shoujo
I probartly will update this review as the dev. goes on.
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