I tried to get into this, but it was too painful after a couple hours.  It's painfuly clear that English isn't the developer's first language, but this just seems like a kid psmmed some stuff through google translate and called it good.  Way too many grammatical errors, spelling errors and just plain bad writing.

The writing is very juvinile and immature.  It's seems like it was written by a recluse with no real understanding of women, and or romantic social interaction and thinks negging is a good way to land a woman.

It feels hapless and hastily thrown together with no effort put into the drafting process.

The premise of the story is ok I guess, but the MC really comes off as a fucking creep. I understand he's had a difficult life and the author is going for a bad boy persona, but this is just bad.  One of the main girls comes off as extremely unstable in the way she acts towards the MC, the other is extremely naive, yet somehow comfortable with extremely forward sexual advances.  Not realistic in the slightest.

I tried to get itno this, but it just became too painful to force my way through the bad writing and even worse dialogue.