The game does quite a bit, for a short game. It's fun to play, and has some interesting aspects to it, and has the perfect amount of humor to it. However, there are still some game breaking bugs still that need fixing. For example, if you go to bed to earlier during the storyteller day, you get the book scene again, and the game stops playing. Playtest and go through it again, and I'd say you got a solid game.
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