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Looking For Feedback

A topic by clipfuze created 13 days ago Views: 78 Replies: 1
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Hey everyone, I just started making games and built my very first browser game!

It's called StickTok. its like tiktok but its animated frame by frame from other useres

here https://clipfuze.itch.io/sticktok

 it's my first prototype, I really need some quick feedback:

  • does the drawing board feel easy to use
  • Did you find any bugs?
  • What would make the game better?
  • and is it beginner friendly

thats all

I opened it and stopped on the first screen, which is itself an answer to your beginner-friendly question: the game opens straight onto a Username / Passcode form, with no guest option and no line saying what I'd be signing up for. I wasn't going to make an account to look at a prototype, so I can't tell you how the drawing board feels.

Two things I could check, though.

The embed is 600x800 with the fullscreen button turned off. On a 1366x768 laptop that leaves 305px of your game below the fold — the "Enter Sticktok" button included — with no way out into fullscreen. Ticking "Fullscreen button" in the embed options, or bringing the height down nearer 600, fixes it in one click.

One of your tags is a typo: simluator. itch.io/games/tag-simluator has two games standing on it. Tags are shelves, and that one is empty.

Good hook, for what it's worth — a feed you have to draw yourself is a premise I'd click.