giving these their own thread so as not to clutter up the one for bugs. lmk if you need anything more to pinpoint where these are in the story.
"we finally decide to set it with rock-paper-scissors" - should be 'settle', yeah?
my b if there is a period after the exclamation mark intentionally
'had first describe it' missin a d
weird tense use in that last sentence
right at the start of Abby's POV scene, "Madison" still has this nameplate for her first line
the the
the rush of sensations rush over me
the the
honestly not sure if the tense switch was intentional, what with fairy time
mind's eye
