Ditzy's first event - The word choice felt very opinionated and heavy-handed. Describing all of the customers as literal "disgusting, unkempt losers" and then the branch options really emphasizing that what Joe is doing is wrong and "exploiting" guys with "no social skills" felt forced, out of place, and unnecessary. I even chose the neutral option for the main character to not weigh in on what he's talking about, only for it to reiterate that he thinks Joe is doing a bad thing and that the character is instead just accepting the paycheck with unspoken criticism. It's a scene that needs heavy changing to those inner thoughts and to remove what comes off as the writer's bias towards robotic strip clubs and the type of guys who would go to one