I like this system!
- Layout is really clean
- You manage a lot of content in a small amount of space, no text feels like filler
- Your procedures are nice and easy to follow
- Example town, dungeon, and wilderness sections are great ideas
- Alternate rules are a nice touch
- GM advice is great, too!
For the game jam, how do you want us to attribute your system in the text? I notice that you don't have a license, it just says "All rights reserved."