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Feedback on my first game

A topic by BorsheBlock created 4 days ago Views: 73 Replies: 2
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Hi! We’re a tiny team, and we just released our first game—on which we spent 1.5 years of effort and time. Unfortunately, it hasn’t gotten much attention yet. We’d be really grateful if you could rate it!

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Thank you! Your time and feedback.

Hi! I really like the border and it looks like fun! 
Here's my 2 cents:

- Where's the title? I had to scroll down to find the name of the game.
- Screenshots don't show gameplay. What will the player be doing here?
- The text reads very GPT-ish. Did you write that yourself?

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Hi! Thank you, I really appreciate it!

  1. This is quite strange because my page looks like this. I’ll figure out how to fix it. 
     
  2. Thanks for pointing that out. You know, sometimes it is hard to rate your own work.
  3. Well, yeah, you’re right. You see, English isn’t my first language, so I’ve tried to use it to make my text a bit more "bright".

Also, I’ve made some updates on the page. I’d love to hear your thoughts.