Hello there, Ladies and Gentlemen!
I've created a completely Free-to-Play mix between a tabletopRPG and a Party game for casual funsies with friends (or foes!) - https://aledelpho.itch.io/big-dragon-show 

Now - even though I've got a few downloads, I was wondering if someone (anyone!) could give me a feedback on the rulebook (don't worry, it's just a few pages long!).

I'm mainly interested in understanding if:

- Is the structure of the Turn clear? (If the instructions on how the turn works and the example are not enough to make it clear I'm in BIG trouble)
- Can you spot any GROSS mistranslations in the english version? (I'm italian and I pretty much speak like SuperMario... so I'm not a certified english "mothertongue" so to speak. Mamma mia!)

Sorry, this is my first experiment on building a Rulebook and I'm very, very worried about the silence.

If these two things are "Ok" I think I can relax a little bit.