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TTRPG + PartyGame = BigDragonShow ... (and I need feedback!)

A topic by Aledelpho created Apr 24, 2025 Views: 160 Replies: 2

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Now - even though I've got a few downloads, I was wondering if someone (anyone!) could give me a feedback on the rulebook (don't worry, it's just a few pages long!).

I'm mainly interested in understanding if:

- Is the structure of the Turn clear? (If the instructions on how the turn works and the example are not enough to make it clear I'm in BIG trouble)
- Can you spot any GROSS mistranslations in the english version? (I'm italian and I pretty much speak like SuperMario... so I'm not a certified english "mothertongue" so to speak. Mamma mia!)

Sorry, this is my first experiment on building a Rulebook and I'm very, very worried about the silence.

If these two things are "Ok" I think I can relax a little bit.

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AxalKay163 days ago(+1)

Your game is charming and has a lot of fun ideas. I have not played it but it does look fun. Personally I would move the example page right to the start. Having examples of play keep the rules form feeling abstract. I did not notice any translation errors.

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Aledelpho163 days ago

Thank you so much for the feedback!
Yes, I think you're right. I'll start to brainstorm some ideas in order to add several "Example pages" that looks a little bit better and more "integrated" than the last one before the Character sheets.

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