Hello, my name is Lainy and I just completed my very first IF game. It’s short due to only having a week to write a decent story, code, and debug before having to hand it in for class. I am looking for any constructive feedback on:
- Storytelling: Did the storyline keep you engaged or did it feel rushed?
- Choices: Were there enough choices for the player to make? Did they have a significant impact on the story?
- Writing and Dialogue: How was the writing style and dialogue? Were they well-written and engaging?
- Coding and Debugging: Any technical issues or bugs that you encountered while playing?
- Overall Experience: What are your overall thoughts on the game? Would you recommend it to others?
Your feedback will greatly help me improve as a developer and storyteller, so please be honest and specific in your critiques. Thank you for taking the time to play my game!
Story: As a military combat journalist, your mission is to uncover the mystery of the Star Odyssey, a military ship lost on Planet C-10 five years ago. But upon arrival, you realize this assignment is anything but straightforward. https://lainy-literati-games.itch.io/mysteries-of-the-star-odyssey🚀🔍