El crítico is my first game ever. I know I can sound repetitive; but even though the game is far from perfect I still love it to death. I make it with the Rpg maker MV engine; the game is short and linear, it's almost like an interactive visual novel. But I hope that you gain something valuable if you get the chance of try it, and if you like it please share it. It would help me a lot.
Link:
https://ouji-akamine.itch.io/el-crtico-english