I love that Ike turned into a pathetic trap slave <3 he seemed like such a douchebag. I love traps, but he was not open to the idea (at first), so this is sweet karma in my eyes. Maybe he was not meant to be seen as a douchebag, but there's many things he does at the beginning that give a bad first impression (not being gentle after being asked, Bella not playing along, putting his manly insecurities above all else as soon as he is isekai'd in contrast to Bella who had her priorities in the right place, etc)

Bella is pretty cute, and her interactions with Ike are also cute. I like how the game shows some of his redeeming qualities as it goes on, he genuinely cares about Bella. It's sad there won't be an act 3 due to life getting in the way, but it was fun while it lasted.

Wonderful story and I like the art. I found it really annoying how I had to often double tap to see the next line of dialogue (not the next dialogue box), there's too many points that ask for a pause.

Improvements

• This needs more music. It's the same song through the whole game.

Spelling and writing mistakes:

• There were probably many moments where gender pronouns were mixed up.
• Multiple instances of incorrect uppercasing of words.
• Famous People of Flowen Encyclopedia
  • Ike "She moved to a Random City" He*, also, maybe lower case random city
  • Ike "Bella bought him to Flowen" brought*
  • Bella "She is very royal especially towards the ones she loves" did you mean loyal? (not sure if you can use royal in this context since english is not my first language)
  • Bella "Even though they gave him Castles and Royalty" Her*. Also, lowercases.
  • Rose. There's some confusion as to what ruined everything, was it moving to Flowen or being defeated?
• When dumb brat bitch captures Ike and attempts to rape him "Now, how does it feel to be Ike's cock sleeve?" It should say Bella

Tips for players:

I know you love the genocide route, but you are a weak defenseless pathetic little trap. You can't always do genocide. Just avoid the enemies unless you are futa. I never leveled up and I didn't grind, I got through fine. It fits the narrative.

Press ctrl to skip dialogue quickly. So quick you won't get to read it.

You start every battle with full stamina. Never hold back from using it.

Money cheat: The well in the town gives you infinite money. 5 gold every time you interact with it. It should allow Ike to buy weapons, I am not sure if you can do this at the beginning.