When I first saw the game's page I thought it was going to be a horror game disguised as a NSFW game. That is a interesting idea and it seems I was half right because it looked like it in the first 2 minutes, even with the warnings I think you could fool someone lol.

Anyways, very interesting and good game, didn't find anything that I didn't like actually, I myself like some clussy from time to time even if it's a crazy one haha. 

I didn't find any errors or anything weird (I actually did found one, not sure if it's a error but on the minute 16:42 you seemed to forgot to "tag" creampie and the narrator spoke in her place), the text was well-written and very fluid, it looked a little rushed in some parts but I think that's just me. Really, didn't find anything that needs to be adjusted or anything like that, well, you could change the text box and the font of the texts to something better maybe. That makes me wonder, are you going to add more stuff to the game or just polish it?

By the way I did a video of it, got all the endings, hope you don't mind. 

P.S. Hope to see more of creampie, be it the comics that you did or in future games :)