Amazing job on the writing! Everything was smooth as butter. It felt like I read a 10h story in 30 minutes, just wow. Keep up the fantastic work!
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Hey, first of all, fantastic game you have here, short, but unique at the same time.
Sadly, I didn't have much fun since I encountered a annoying bug(?).
I watched some people in the comments play, and it seems I'm the only one having this problem... Anyway, problem is that my mouse sensitivity is messed up in-game, lower than it should actually. I have to aggressively slide my mouse to the side to see the door, I basically die in mere seconds because of this...
Any chance you know what this might be happening? Not sure if it's because of the high FPS (150) or what, since I even increased my mouse speed, but nothing seems to work...
Yup, this was amazing, atmosphere and everything was perfect, needs some improvements here and there but for a Alpha that looks fantastic already. Environment was a little repetitive and lacking, Inventory needs some work too as I don't think a bandage should take that much space, or at least be stackable. Other little problems apart, the game looks very promising already, good luck!
Interesting game. Demo didn't offer much content but it made me somewhat interested to see what's going to happen next. There is some bugs that made me replay the game more than once, one in the jumpscare part where we going to turn the power on got my attention as you can replay it...? But other than that, game looks good and attracted my attention. Curious to see what the next chapter has to offer ;)
Tried out the newest version, I could see some changes and very good ones, game's better than the first release for sure but... What's the purpose of the first level? The car is still stuck, I couldn't see on what as he got stuck in a dark place, glad you put another level that introduces better of what's to come in the game.
That big camp van(?) also get stuck quite a lot too, in the first level and the third when there's another car, you might have to take a look into that specific car.
Also, this idea popped up after I saw the intro of the game but, maybe give the cars red lights? Like, they are normal at first but when they get very close to the player they turn red? Just a idea.
It's a nice change to see a different game being posted here on itch, had a good time playing it but there's a lot to improve, we can run away from "Wendigo" easily if we react quickly but I don't like how he runs as much as we do, there's also the bear trap that one shots it, I like it but it's a little stronger than it should. I changed my review since the first time I posted with everything, not sure if I will play because it's co-op but I wish you luck! I'II be watching how the game goes, looks promising ;)
There was only a lack of detail actually, I mean, it's obvious that you will kill someone but who? Not sure if the collectables where relevant...? Most of them didn't make much sense. I guess puting a note somewhere of your boss getting angry or giving you more work might clear everything out for people but that would make it to easy to understand. Well, not sure what you still plan on doing with this game but I'II be sure to keep my eyes open for the next one >.>
Gave it a go and game looks great! I love the idea to bring back cars that try to murder you, I still vividly remember watching Christine, that was one of my favorites. But even saying this I feel like something's missing, like, first impressions are creepy but after it, it's just okay. Game is great but the cars needs a little more of creepiness on them... I think.
You know, I was NOT expecting a steam release haha. Looks great, still have to play Morris, gonna try my chance to get a "diskette" but I will definitely buy it when I can.
That makes me remember, I did upload on SteamGriddb a artwork of Melissa when it was released, completely forgot about it because they took ages to accept, Very amateur stuff though. Keep up the amazing work! Really glad to see you where able to put this on steam :)
Honestly, this was fantastic. When I first played I was terrified by the sounds, you did a good job on that. It was interesting that you could change between 2D & 3D, very cool concept. The game also seems to be...easy? I mean, I only had to play it 8-10 to finish and decorate everything. Anyways, that was great, good job!
When I first saw the game's page I thought it was going to be a horror game disguised as a NSFW game. That is a interesting idea and it seems I was half right because it looked like it in the first 2 minutes, even with the warnings I think you could fool someone lol.
Anyways, very interesting and good game, didn't find anything that I didn't like actually, I myself like some clussy from time to time even if it's a crazy one haha.
I didn't find any errors or anything weird (I actually did found one, not sure if it's a error but on the minute 16:42 you seemed to forgot to "tag" creampie and the narrator spoke in her place), the text was well-written and very fluid, it looked a little rushed in some parts but I think that's just me. Really, didn't find anything that needs to be adjusted or anything like that, well, you could change the text box and the font of the texts to something better maybe. That makes me wonder, are you going to add more stuff to the game or just polish it?
By the way I did a video of it, got all the endings, hope you don't mind.
P.S. Hope to see more of creampie, be it the comics that you did or in future games :)
No, I was talking about the one that begins in 0:10 on the video, but the cabin one is also a song that didn't really fit in there. Both songs doesn't really match with the atmosphere for me, but it's just my opinion through, there are a lot of moments where some sounds didn't match with the atmosphere but it's not really something important or anything like that, I think the most important thing to change first is the font, and don't worry, the volume was fine and everyone can decrease it in the menu, not really something that you should be concerned ;)
I posted this on 28 of May and just forgot to mention here :facepalm:, but anyways, It was pretty nice playing this, super fun to get all the endings too, the story is not something fantastic or incredible but it was very enjoyable, the art is also pretty good, one of the reasons why I played it, but there are some things that I didn't like it, I might even do a review but for now is just this: Sometimes you put sounds where it doesn't work very well. The second music that plays is a little... let's say, rough? I don't know but I don't think that music fits in there, I think it would be better to put a piano or a suspense music or something like that. The font of the text doesn't go well with the textbox, it's a little ugly to see it sometimes, but anyway, this is your first VN(?) so I can let it slide, but you should really work on some of these sounds that don't fit well with the atmosphere and everything, good luck and hope to see more!
It's a simple game but a pretty good one so no surprise here ;)
Well, you could do the same you did on your first game, but just tell it when the game ends, I think that would be better, or you should let it be like that because like I said, it's open for interpretation, but that's up to you.
I will excitedly await for your next game then!