This was an cool horror game about returning home and relaxing until someone knocks on the door. The story progresses from there and I felt that more could have been done to make the game more horrifying. The objectives for the main character to do work seem to take a long time before the player can execute the tasks required to proceed to the next part of the game, making the game less intense that it could have been. I enjoyed the horrifying narrow hallways that the main character get put into at different parts of the game but the cut before each new scene was quite long and made the game less interesting than it was. Would be cool if there were more horrifying events present in the game as currently the game is just about opening doors and walking around. 

Thank you for reading my comment and I wish you good luck in your future endeavours.

I really appreciate the gameplay. This is my first stab at anything horror related and one of my first games good enough in my eyes to get a demo. The time taken before the player can complete the task is a temporary feature as I wanted to make sure the objectives were clear, and it was the most straight-forward fix to the bug I had where if you completed the task before it finished writing it would delete what it wrote, but continue writing. I'll fix this by making it type faster and maybe have it work independently. The game is really simple as of right now, without a really deep storyline. The storyline that I hope to implement should help with the horrifying issues. Once again thank you for playing my game. This is my first attempt at a horror game and I was trying not to use jumpscares.

Thank you for playing and giving criticism to make the game better, your changes will be implemented

Will be looking forward to more of your creations in the future! Keep up the good work!