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Looking for some feed back on my twine game

A topic by Brainiac Stinky created Apr 18, 2022 Views: 273 Replies: 3
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even though this game is mostly just narrative text, there are a few puzzles. I'm looking for any feedback about the difficulty or just the general game design of the puzzles.


here's the link 

https://matthew-sheridan.itch.io/herptology

I know you asked for game feedback and not page feedback, but I think you should fill out the page with at least a description. I only see a couple of devlog entries, so just looking at the page I'd be hesitant to press Play.

Also, the game isn't sized to fit the window (or the window isn't sized to fit the game), so when I hit Play I only see a portion of a graphic, and it's not obvious the text goodies are down below in scroll land, especially if you don't know this is a text narrative. Even fullscreen only displays part of the first line of text. I just tried a few other twine games (with the Twine tag) here at random and they all fit within my MacBook Air screen or come pretty close.

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Hmmm I'll look into the screen bounds issue might just be an oversight on my part lol