Second time I've played and just want to say, love the creative writing and the open-ended gameplay... Nothing quite like wandering into the mines randomly and leaving a hero! Anyway, this time I started taking screenshots as I played through. Highlighted these screenshot for possible issues, and numbered the screenshot for cross-referencing in notepad. To avoid a giant post, I uploaded the txt and img host below. Color coded the numbers in the upper left corner. Red is pretty serious, yellow is a warning, white is suggested, and blue is just optional. Text suggestions based mostly around US English. If it helps, I'll post more as I can.