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Bell Bottoms and Brainwaves | Looking to be more concise and clean up verbiage.

A topic by Mekkakat created Jul 25, 2021 Views: 183
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This is my 60's sci-fi dark comedy RPG one-page romp, Bell Bottoms and Brainwaves 

https://mekkakat.itch.io/bell-bottoms-and-brainwaves

I'd love any feedback you might have, but my goals are:

  • Find any inconsistencies in language or wording
  • Clean up verbiage or stumbling blocks
  • Clarify any rules that might be tricky
  • Make any text rules into visual elements where it makes sense

I've made the rules purposely loose/vague in some places for narrative freedom, but hopefully that's not too wily nilly. We'll see. 

Thanks for your time.