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My First Choose Your Own Adventure Twine Game - what did I do wrong?

A topic by freeworldgroup created Sep 25, 2017 Views: 55
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It's a game about a monster... a depressed monster... a time traveling depressed monster. 

I know the game lacks something or a lot, not quite sure what. Did I over complicate it? Would like to hear some feedback if possible: