Hello there. The email itch.io sent after I posted my project suggested posting here, so I am. I just uploaded the first version of my first attempt at writing interactive fiction, and I would love some feedback. I am one hundred percent sure that it's not great and can be greatly improved, and getting honest feedback is the first step to doing that.

https://bewbsop.itch.io/ignorance-is-bliss-isnt-it

Btw, if you do play it, please don't hold back on criticizing anything that can be improved simply because it's my first game.