Hi all, 

I made my very first interactive story game in Twine recently and would love your feedback! 

It is a second person, choose your own ending, slightly spooky/uncanny game where you play as an assistant manager of a small town grocery store closing up for the night, and nothing is what it seems.   

I am brand new to this and have minimal coding/design skills but am hoping to learn! I would appreciate any feedback. 

Link is here: https://sweatyicedcoffee.itch.io/acollectionofcherubs