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Zuriel Joven

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Bad news: the mac build straight up won't run for me :(

I love this game; this is definitely my favorite one so far. Great job on the mechanics, level design, visuals and audio choices!

It doesn't work in Chrome. I'll try the mac build once it's released though :)

This was fun to play and a cool concept, but here are a few suggestions. 

  1. Fix the audio looping. Don't restart the song every time the player dies.
  2. Either make the player speed the same speed as the horizontal moving blocks or make it so when you stand on them you don't have to move and it carries you.
  3. The text box seems to cut out after each level so you might want to look into your UI scaling.

Otherwise, great job!

This was fun to play and a cool concept, but here are a few suggestions. 

  1. Fix the audio looping. Don't restart the song every time the player dies.
  2. Either make the player speed the same speed as the horizontal moving blocks or make it so when you stand on them you don't have to move and it carries you.
  3. The text box seems to cut out after each level so you might want to look into your UI scaling.

Otherwise, great job!

Pretty creative use of the theme, but the execution could use some work. If you have more time to work on it, rework your long jump mechanic, turn down the volume of the ceiling spike sounds, and add some tweaks to make the game easier (like letting the player jump higher, or platforms lasting longer before breaking). Good job otherwise.

This game is very clean and polished, the gameplay is nice and responsive and the concept behind it is pretty cool as well. The only caveat I have is that in my opinion the lifetime lasts too long. Also, I think the rewind feature might have been a little too much going on and that the hourglass flip mechanic should've been enough.  Other than that great job!

This game is very clean and polished, the gameplay is nice and responsive and the concept behind it is pretty cool as well. The only caveat I have is that in my opinion the lifetime lasts too long. Other than that great job!

Very polished, fun game. The only problem was the fullscreen thing you mentioned in the description and I couldn't get the game to run in a proper viewing environment (full screen would not let me click on the moles). Even then I still enjoyed the music and playing the game. Good job!

This is a very engaging piece of interactive fiction. You're clearly a very talented story writer, even if this game is not in a traditional gameplay format. I would suggest adding some music to complement the mood, maybe some voice acting (although not necessary by a long shot), or more visual cues to offset the large amount of reading in your game. As a side note, have you ever considered making one of those digital stories that plays out via text? Your interactive fiction skills would be really honed for that.

Man, this game looks super cool but as others are saying I could not get the interact key to work for me. I have a Mac so downloading the .exe is not an option. If you can get to the bottom of this and fix it in the future let us all know cuz I really look forward to playing this game.

Hey, I love your program!

CLOTHING SUGGESTION:

By any chance, could you consider adding a hoodie/hooded jacket to the outerwear selection?

Keep up the great work!