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First Invite Me In and now this?!  Your games are so fun and I am patiently, yet eagerly awaiting more when you're ready^^  The art and writing are so sweet and appealing!  Loved this and love Cole, I suspect him of nothing and fully expect only angelic behavior going forward <3  Thank you for sharing this, hope you are well!

This is such a cute little game and I had a lot of fun playing it!  Sun and Moon are darlings and I really liked their characterization here and the VA did a great job~^^  

I also had some issues with the saving, but the game was about a 2 hour play for someone who reads pretty slowly and rereads a lot^^;;  So it wasn't a big deal overall.

My gallery reset after closing the game, so I'll just have to screenshot after my next playthrough but that just means I get to go through it again! 

But as a whole this was great experience and I am really glad you made this game, Snowyrey!  So a huge thank you for it!!! <3

I have a Tumblr?  I only realized I had it a couple days ago, it is suuuper old.  Not totally sure how to use it, but I think there's messaging. 

My account: @l8asusual-sans-blog

This is so cute!  I love characters and really hope to see more of them in the full release someday :)  But I know game development can be tedious and time-consuming so no rush~ Hope the whole team is well^^

This game updating feels like going for ice cream on a bright summer day.  I adore this game and these boys so dearly.  I want to check out the individual routes, but its impossible to hurt one of them.  This is literally the only game I'll go for a poly option, bless my darlings.

You do such a wonderful job and I love your work!  Thank you for the update!  Hope you are well and happy~ ♡☆♡

Ps. I just have to say this, thank you for writing sentences so that they don't end in the word 'for'.  I ascend every time you avoid it.

It is absolutely okay!  I'd genuinely love to help if that's something you'd appreciate.  If you would like an English script editor I could not be more happy to assist you^^  Just let me know~

Thank you again for your amazing game☆

I really really enjoyed this!!!  It's so intriguing story-wise and beautiful visually for that cherry on top~  Plus, it feeds my need love of jesters and that is greatly appreciated^○^~☆♡

Also, I hope this isn't out of line to say, but regarding your request for English translation feedback: overall it was solid and I never felt like the meaning was lost in the slightest.  That said, I did notice a few deviations which is totally normal for translators to do.  You did amazing!  If it would be helpful I'd be happy to send the few corrections I saw, but also wanted to offer help with script editing as a whole if you'd like.  (English is my first language and I'm pretty decent with it^_^;)  I would never want compensation, I just wanted to offer in case that was something that would help you.  Sorry again if this is a peculiar offer and isn't received well, that's not my intention at all!  

Hope university is going well and life overall!  No rush on the update, take your time and be sure to have fun with it since that's most important ^_^

Sorry I didn't express myself better and if that came across as impolite!  They're definitely different characters and it was actually the art style that reminded me of Louhi, which made sense when I saw you made that too~  But I'm really glad they're besties XD

I didn't think it felt rushed because you did an amazing!  Thank you for making and sharing this project~

I just saw, but you're the dev for Infectious Doctor!  I am entirely serious when I say I was thinking about that game earlier today because Zephir gave me flashbacks.  Now I get why!^^;;

Anyway, review: this was honestly really really enjoyable.  And that whiplash switch there had me legitimately laughing in the best way.  I really adore the character designs too!  A fun play and I am excited for part 2! 

The audible gasp that escaped me seeing this dev note in my feed.  I really love your game!  But it is worth the wait to be sure, so take your time!  And I hope life is going well these days~ 

Little Feronin ^x^~<3   Welp, off to go replay the demo! 

I rushed here fresh off the heels of Ellis's route (haven't done Benji's but must because I already can't get enough of this game) to say how fun this was to experience!  From the writing to the art to the characters it was so well done and a true pleasure to play.  

Maybe its unfair to say this having not played Benji's route yet, buuuut, I wish to wrap Ellis is a Merino wool blanket, hand him a cup of freshly brewed tea (however he likes it) and place him gently in my pocket with as many Radcliffe books as I can find.  Has he committed crimes?  Not sure.  But do I care if he has?  Absolutely not.  He is (metaphorically) mine now and I will cherish him.

Thank you for making this and sharing it!  I am really excited for whenever Act 3 is ready.  But take your time and have fun doing it, please!  I can wait as long as it takes and will be here the second it drops, whenever that may be.  Thank you again and have a lovely 'every measure of time'!    

(Postscript: using my VN-protag-insert, Winter, for this one turned out to be fitting.)

Oh, sure!  If you can forgive the infantile state of the server you are welcome to click the link and join.  Then feel free to either leave a message in the server or shoot me a message directly, if you'd like.  Happy to have you!

Haha, same, honestly.  I consider myself "tech savvy" in the amateur leagues, but any and all social media dwells way outside my purview.  I say this to temper expectations, but can't make an omelet without cracking a few eggs!  That said I'll try to learn more via the internet and my brother. 

For now, the barest bones of a server has been made... question mark.  I think it'll work, but I don't recommend anyone hopping in until it gets a touch more refined and figured.  I am posting the link though because I couldn't get it to recognize your username and this seemed the next best option for connecting in Discord.  

https://discord.gg/DzgxkYuT

Sorry I can't deliver a show-stopping server laden with bots and pizzazz (yet!?) but I will promise my best efforts.  😅

You are such a kind and enjoyable creator to talk to~  Your commitment to interacting with your players and giving thoughtful replies is amazing.  Thank you 😊 

Also, sorry if this is out of line or rude to ask, but do you have any issue with a Discord server being made for MtG fans?  Admittedly, I have no clue about maintaining and moderating that, but if you're fine with it I may try.  Maybe?  I'm not great socially, but this art deserves committed fans 👏  And, with your permission, a space for those fans to gather and converse.  Sorry again if this is too presumptuous an ask!  Have a great day!~^^

As promised, I am back to rave. This is such an amazing story and I love the cast! Naomi is my baby now and I would die for her. I have also developed an unhealthy acceptable amount of adoration for Vir. Knew from the itch page cast lineup that he was the one I'd like, and behold! I have the survival instincts of a pickle and would fold like a lawn chair if he asked for anything. Can he truly be trusted? TBD. Will I trust him with my life? Undoubtedly and unerringly.

 I wish I had any friends who played visual novels so I could politely demand that they play this immediately. I need someone to talk with about it.  

Incredible job! I cannot wait for more! (Except I totally can, no rush, make sure you're well and never force yourself. Making art isn't fun when it is taxing or feels like a chore~)  

Art: 10/10

Story: 10/10

Atmosphere: 10/10

Overall: Perfection

Thank you for sharing this with us♡

Full transparency, I haven't gotten the first chapter finished yet, but since finding this game I've been very stoked to play it (life just has a way of leaving me very little personal time^^;)!!!  Seeing the feed notification for chapter 2 was thrilling and I'm so excited!  Once I finish the available story I'll definitely come back to rave in the comments!~

This was such a fun and sweet taste of some precious characters and a compelling story!  I cannot wait for the full thing!  Eagerly, yet patiently, keeping my eyes peeled for updates <3   Great atmosphere, art, and really just everything all around.  Feronin is going right into my pocket.  Thank you for sharing your art!

This game is amazing and I loved absolutely every second of it immensely.  I am going to go play every game this author made.  The quality of this one has given me proof I found a gold mine.  Goodbye sleep schedule.  Thank you, dev, for this incredible work.

Oh, well, in light of this joyous news I will hold off on the kidnapping and wait patiently for his return.  I will be peeking in to leave snacks, though.

I'll be sure to check the socials, thank you!

Coming from the demo however long ago and eagerly awaiting the full release, let me just say, did not disappoint!  I thoroughly enjoyed this game and it's charming art and writing <3  

I will be stuffing Veles into my pocket and taking him home now, please and thank you.

Fantastic.  Stupendous.  I loved and enjoyed this so much!  Printing out the CGs to eat for every meal. *chefs kiss*  Thank you for the awesome experience!  Can't wait for more of your games if/when you want to make them~ 

Frick yeah!  Stalking my feed page has paid off, just sorry to be an hour behind the 8-ball. Time to devour this.  Thank you!

Hi, yes.  May I please eat your Human Bill design with a spork?  It looks scrumptious and I love it. May be one of my favourites yet. 11100010 10010110 10110011/10

The route demos so far are a lot of fun and I can't wait for more~  Thank you for sharing your art with us!

"O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!"

I have been peeking in on this game page now and again hoping I missed the full release update since playing the demo.  So excited to play it in its entirety!  Thank you for the hardwork, care, and effort I'm certain went into this if the demo was an accurate indicator (and I'm positive it was).  Be back asap on the 31st.  Until then~

This was really sweet!  I absolutely love Ori, thus the only complaint I have for this game is that I don't get more of him.  10/10

Also, the UI is so adorable.  I live for VNs having that extra little bit of detail.  It's a surefire sign that the game is going to be great, example seen here.  (If I called it a UI incorrectly, sorry!  I'm referring to the notepad text box, pencil and shavings on the history screen, etc.)  Incredible! <3

Sorry in advance for the lengthy, potentially nonsense, rambling to follow.  

"I was never really insane except upon occasions when my heart was touched."  -E.A.Poe

This is one of the most incredible games I've ever played.  It feels like standing out in a gentle rain just before the sun shines through and warms your upturned face.  It's sitting alone on a beach at dusk and listening to the waves as the tide ebbs and flows.  It feels like coming home.

I believe a work of fiction must be truly beautiful to make me homesick for somewhere I've never lived; nostalgic for a place that doesn't exist.  This game will live in my heart forever, I think.  It has settled there. 

I found Our Life during a low point.  The joy, warmth, and peace I found while playing carried on even going about my day.  The heart bears a lot as you travel through life.  It seeks moments of rest and unburdening.  Mine found that here.  That's a gift I can't repay nor express fully my gratitude toward.  Thank you, GBPatch team, from the bottom of my heart. 

Sorry again for the length and ridiculousness.  And thank you if you read this far.  Maybe you'll find rest here too.  If not, I pray you find it somewhere. 

I really loved this!  Though I'm excited for the full game, please take all the time you need so that first and foremost you're having fun making it.  No matter how long it takes, I'll be here ready to download once it's up.  Thank you for making this and sharing it!  Keep up the amazing work and have a great life~

Thank you!

Really fun and I loved the art!  Thank you for making this~  I'd like a tiny (side effect-free) Rot to carry around in my pocket.  

Would it be in poor taste to ask for a hint or two for ending 4?  I eludes me.  Sorry and thank you again!

Wow, what a demo!  Seriously, this was great and I'm hooked.  Can't wait for the real deal to drop!  My eyes will stay peeled!  10/10

The fact that I've been on this site for as long as I have been, scouring for games like this, and only just now found this is an actual crime.  Incredible.  From the art to the characters to the writing it was almost as divine as Egen.  Thank you for creating and sharing this gift.  Loved every second of it.  I give this '# of planets Egen conquered'/10

Such a sweet experience!  And let me just say, saved Alexandre for last because he looked like he'd be my favorite.  1000/10.  Expectations surpassed with perfection.  Thank you and bless y'all. <3 Love all your works!!!

Love the update, love your games, and love that you've got such awesome personal news!  So excited for what's to come~  But just in case that sounds pushy, always make sure you're doing well and don't push yourself for this.  Maybe a no-brainer, but your well-being is most important to your fans so stay sane first and foremost.  We will be here for you!  Safe travels on the tour and have a ton of fun!  Thanks for all your hard work to give us amazing content <3

Marking my calendar!  I am totally stoked!!! <3

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Incredible, amazing, astounding, spectacular, fantastic, lovely, precious, beautiful.  Mychael and the game.  I, for obvious reasons, don't think I can say he did everything perfectly (unless it's partially or wholly involuntary) but I feel too empathetic towards his situation to really blame him in a way that I'd want MC to cut ties. That said, I am so stoked for more of this game and its eventual completion!  Thank you so much for making and sharing this with us!!! <3

I'm not sure if I'm relieved I found this only now or disappointed.  On one hand the wait would've killed me (but seriously speaking, no pressure or rush - just be healthy and happy first!), but on the other hand my life is improved with this in it.  You've done an incredible job and I am so excited for Chapter 2!!!  Thank you for sharing your talent and creativity! 

I seriously adore this game and to say I can't wait for more is an understatement.  Keith is great, love the guy.  Tenebris will live rent free in my head and heart the rest of my life.  Bless him.  The verdict is still out on whether he's fixed some of my problems or become several more.  Guess we'll see once it's all out.  You can have my bank info for it.  Anyways, thank you so much for making this and sharing your talent with the world!  Amazing job!!! <3