I really really enjoyed this!!! It's so intriguing story-wise and beautiful visually for that cherry on top~ Plus, it feeds my need love of jesters and that is greatly appreciated^○^~☆♡
Also, I hope this isn't out of line to say, but regarding your request for English translation feedback: overall it was solid and I never felt like the meaning was lost in the slightest. That said, I did notice a few deviations which is totally normal for translators to do. You did amazing! If it would be helpful I'd be happy to send the few corrections I saw, but also wanted to offer help with script editing as a whole if you'd like. (English is my first language and I'm pretty decent with it^_^;) I would never want compensation, I just wanted to offer in case that was something that would help you. Sorry again if this is a peculiar offer and isn't received well, that's not my intention at all!
Hope university is going well and life overall! No rush on the update, take your time and be sure to have fun with it since that's most important ^_^