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This is genuinely useful - thank you for giving it a second go and writing out what tripped you up.

You're right about the wall of text. The tutorial explains systems before you've had a reason to care about them, which is backwards. I'm going to strip it down and lean on on-screen cues instead.

On your actual question: I don't think I have a good answer yet, and I think that's the real problem. The intended loop is "place a building, watch rent tick up, reinvest" - but if that isn't landing in the first two minutes, saying it louder won't fix it. I need to find a hook that's visible without reading anything.

I don't want to promise a date I can't keep. But your two comments have been more useful than anything I've gotten so far, so thank you for taking the time.

Fair enough - the assets and code were AI-assisted, and that's declared up front, so I'm not going to argue with the label.

What I'd genuinely like to know: does it play badly, or does it just look that way? If the core loop is flat, that's on me and I want to fix it.

If it's only the presentation, that's a different problem.

Either way, thanks for actually looking at it.