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That flash turning the background white is the greatest cinematic experience i have ever have the chance to witness-

I really like the interaction between the narrator and the player's choice where they will comment and try to steer the player into different choices! It is also really clever to show what end do we have an a description of them, makes the replay experience way more convenient and actually intrigue me to complete all the endings!

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I really like the minimalistic approach on your design here! Simple color change on the background informing the contents are from different character with different perspective and characteristics, really effective! 

I do feel like the choices are not very populated since a lot of the pages are only having one option. But i do like the idea of hiding the effect of the choices until later so they cannot be traced back easily and change.

I also get a very strong feeling of reading a text converted from a book, both good and bad. It felt very formal and the writing are great, but sometimes i feel like i am not interacting that much apart from the major choice.

But i love the frequent switching of perspective in the narrative as the player go through each character's mind and try to affect each other's relationship and feeling!

This game is a masterpiece. I really liked the humor all around the game and just how different each major path could be! The map to the bug hole was a little repetitive for me and i was a little confused on how to navigate.

I also think the 8bit style of the whole game is fitting greatly with the theme! All the pixel art are spot on! 

Sometimes the perspective of action in the choice section switch from first person to other character's action, which could be a little bit confusing.

But that does not matter, i just love how outlandish the choices we can make and how surprising reasonable the consequences are.

I really liked the sci-fi/action feeling of the narrative.  It is really intriguing to have to choose what tools to bring and see if they help you to resolve the situations you face. The plot is very interesting and it felt like the choices actually cause important consequences.

I also really like the idea that player are only allowed to use an item for once, it create a strategy aspect that make the player care more about how they are interacting with the plot!

I think the background could change more times or add a few imagery to reflect where or what is happening in the plot, that would add a lot more immersion!

I also think the texts are a bit condensed right now, it will be more engaging if they are more separated into several pages

I love your game so much! In first glance it felt like a existential lecture that the creator is trying to force onto players, but it grow more once the player attach themselves more into the questions and situations brought up by the narrator, it felt like the player is having a calm and deep conversation with the game itself and affecting each other's thoughts instead of being told to think of whatever it says. That is really hard to achieve and i think you nailed it!!!

I also love the design direction, very tranquil and thought provoking. It felt like the player is talking to a super computer with the spirit of the creator attached into the codes.

The blinking choices could be a little hard to read but they add a feeling of uncertainty reflected by the narration, so i think its okay to stay that way.

WOOOOOOW! You have mastered the horror and mystery feel with this game! The font, music, sense of lost are all well used to follow along the theme. I also like the idea of discovering your own identity and what happened using the surrounding things.  The minimalist approach on imagery are clever and really hitting the goal as all of them maintain in a same style. The font could be a little difficult to read at first but i get used to it pretty quickly!

I would love to see what happen next in the story!