I really liked the sci-fi/action feeling of the narrative. It is really intriguing to have to choose what tools to bring and see if they help you to resolve the situations you face. The plot is very interesting and it felt like the choices actually cause important consequences.
I also really like the idea that player are only allowed to use an item for once, it create a strategy aspect that make the player care more about how they are interacting with the plot!
I think the background could change more times or add a few imagery to reflect where or what is happening in the plot, that would add a lot more immersion!
I also think the texts are a bit condensed right now, it will be more engaging if they are more separated into several pages