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I like the art. The lack of any background sound whatsoever was kind of unsettling, but it makes sense for this just being test of sorts. The characters were impressive, in that they felt realistic in the very brief time we spent with them. I don't know what to think about the concept of the story itself, and it's not exactly original, but I do think there are interesting ways it could develop. Is the intention to play the concept straight or make it a parody or a satire? If it's not the latter, I can't imagine how the setting being the US would be relevent in a satisfying way.

After playing up to the end of the Chapter Three demo, I can say I'm really excited to see where this story goes. I don't want to leave an official rating and review, because this VN still seems like it's in its infancy stage, but I really enjoyed what there is so far. The character art is really good and their personalities are well varied while also being more than window dressing for the story. 

My only big critique, however, lies with the 'prose'. When it's just the protagonist and we're meant to experience what he is experiencing, the 'prose' becomes repetitively superfluous. There's far too much far too often, that the meaning trying to be conveyed becomes shallowed... if that's a word. A redeeming quality, however, about the 'prose' is that it feels like whoever wrote it did so with passion and to the best of their abilities. To me, that does heighten the emotion immersion that is trying to be communicated, and just because the words feel like they weigh less by themselves, that doesn't mean I didn't clearly understand their meaning.

Actual praise about the text:: I think the sex scenes, so far, have been executed well... relatively speaking, at least. To me, they were long enough to draw out the eroticism without being too long and becoming-pardon my imagery-flacid.

The girls are hot, which always helps in cases like these. Shit, so are the male teachers. If I didn't already think I was a furry because of this VN, if someone told me thinking Moonie and Lazuli are two of the most attractive characters in the history of obscure erotic media makes me a furry, I'd be like, "You're Goddamn right."

This game was really fun. The art and voice acting is simple but consistently high quality. The biggest critique I'd have about the art is the number of faceless characters in the cast. The gameplay is fun despite being so simple, and that combined with the brevity of the game makes it super re-playable. Despite it being short, I found myself being satisfied with just the free content... which I did stop at.

If anyone complains about a part of the game being locked behind a pay wall of $6.50 (how much the member tier of Babus Games' Patreon costs), they should be kindly informed how lucky they are someone would release any amount of such polished content for free.