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Zankman
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Excellent aesthetics that compel one to dive right in and read - but, the layout, although awesome, has two small flaws that should be fixable: the end of the 2nd paragraph/room bleeds onto page 2, and the header and start of the 6th paragraph/room is awkwardly at the bottom left/end of the first column, before breaking over into the top middle/start of the first column. I believe that these are ultimately layout weaknesses that can be addressed with some effort, and perhaps elements like a tiny art piece (symbol even). I hope this isn't seen as cherry-picking criticism - I just think those are small blemishes to something that is otherwise fantastic. Disclaimer: I can't into layout/editing myself, so I'm wholly commeting as a reader, and understand that it takes time and effort to improve the layout as suggested. xD
I like the concept and obviously these are the bones of excellence, but I feel like a few things in the full version are left a bit too understated. As a two-pager it does everything well, yet, perhaps you could use some of the space on page 1 to help clarify further details about the intended mechanism/procedures, a stat block, a FAQ block... As it stands, there's a few questions I am left asking about how to exactly execute this; obviously I like gluing the pieces together and that's the point, but suggestions never hurt. Other than that: there's a typo with "into into" in the intro paragraph's second sentence. Good work!
The physical version looks great there!
The interior layout is clean, legible and well-formatted - no annoying paragraph breaks or leakage - yet has just enough texture and aesthetic, too.
Looking forward to reading it in earnest and running it, too! Perhaps for Vaults of Vaarn or The Electrum Archive...
Hi.
Basically if my submission is "D6 Monsters" or "D6 Encounters" for example, can my PDF submission also include the statblocks?
Or must it literally be only a table and whatever (short) bits fit within it?
Knowing that, aka knowing what is appropriate, desired and intended for this Jam will greatly influence what I focus on.
Thanks.
