This was really cute and pretty hot at the same time. Nice work ^^
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I bet she would be so proud of you...I truly hope he afterlife is everything she hoped it to be. Thank you so much for sharing your story and memories of her, and you have my sympathy. I bet your incredible friendship is the best gift you have given her, because nothing in the world could ever compare.
I absolutely love the concept, consider me a dedicated fan. I was wanting to write something that had a slightly similar concept but I have zero motivation to do something like this, no coding knowledge, and even less talent for it ☹️ i'm glad someone out there shares the idea but actually has the skill and ambition to make it happen. 💫 Thank you so much for making this!
I can't imagine how difficult it must be putting all this together with only a handful of help, but you've done and amazing job with it. Thank you so much for making this, I mean that. I just hope you're not stressing yourself out too much. You have my word, I have plans to give your hard work support on patreon as soon as my broke ass has the money to do so. Stay awesome!
I think I spent more time trying to play beat-the-clock and read everything to understand the backstory than necessary, so much that it distracted me from being scared....The plot or mystery is usually what makes up a huge majority of the creepy factor. I'm sorry. Q.Q I like it if the text gets glitchy, but when it vanishes the second it appears before I can even read three words from it, it leaves zero mystery and instead a ton of confusion. It really wasn't the feeling I was expecting to get from this....and it really did look so promising. Am I doing something wrong....? Or is it supposed to be this way?
I think I needed this honestly. For a first try at twine, you really know how to make any experience feel so real for someone. Probably because some of your readers endure the same suffering...perhaps not the same hell, each hell is different. But we definitely suffer the same pain, the same tears, with similar demons telling us we are undeserving and less than human. But you're not.
You're not a waste of air, you're human and you deserve to be happy like everyone else out there. Perhaps not everyone cares, but its okay because there are a few broken hearts and souls just like you that do care about you, even if they don't know you. No human is undeserving of respect. No matter what past you are from or how different you are, you still matter enough for us to reach through the flames of hell with an outstretched hand seeking yours to help you get free. You just have to reach out too, take it, and don't let go. You may feel weak and the fight may not get any easier, but don't give up when you've made it this far. Keep going to spite those who made you feel this way, they don't deserve power over you just because your endeavors were different from theirs. This is for you and all others alike, to everyone out there who suffers this same way... remember this; if not one else in this world will believe in you, then know that I already do. Why? Because you matter and are worth knowing. This world would be changed if you gave up and left it....so please don't choose to end it all. Such a decision like that is permanent for the awful misery and suffering that is only temporary.
I apologize for the long post, but this Twine really hit home for me, and though this was heartbreaking, I now know i'm not alone and I truly hope these words can help you and others that read them heal.