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This was an interesting read. I just hope its not a true story.  😥 Why make a permanent decision for a temporary problem. You know?

I appreciate your words, I mean that. Thank you for keeping me inspired and motivated. 

I've already been working on editing the first part so the first chapter will not be quite the same for this upcoming update. 

As for any usage of AI, it wasn't used nearly as often/much as people seem to think it was. So the only thing to blame here is my writing style, to which I apologize for and I'll work on it. 

With a bitter attitude like that, I'm not surprised they locked you out of their routes. 🤣

Thank you so much, that really made my week to see this. And I'd be more than happy to see your work, I can tell you have the skill for it already.  :) There needs to be more people like you in this world, you have a natural way of motivating and encouraging people even when they're at their lowest. It's those like you who deserve only the best in life. 

Thanks so much!

This is truly interesting, i'm eager to try it. is there a word or paragraph limit to reach in all three?

Thank you for your comment it helped more than you know. I would like to give it one more shot at this, especially since someone has offered to help as a guide with coding Twine.

I thank the critic for pointing out the errors, though I understand that I can't make everyone happy. So I stopped caring. Only reason I was close to giving up was because they noted the concept was really the only good thing about it. My faith in my work was already precarious since the day I posted it.    

I didn't want to mention this since I felt it wasn't much of an achievement before on my behalf, but I remember that the mayor of our city personally met with me along with 4 other students after reading a prologue I once wrote for a story back in high school. We were selected out of the several in various writing classes and invited to a dinner party to receive an award. Just like this one, not everyone would have liked that story, and that's fine. All I have to say to them is this-  show me your professionally Twine story I'll gladly shut the fuck up. Currently I see none on your page. English isn't my first language either, but I didn't use that as an excuse not to try. Anyways, they know that if they don't like it they don't have to return for the next update. Nonetheless I thank them for taking the time they wasted on reading this far.

I'm grateful that a very good friend of mine, Carolina, pointed this out to me. I would have never seen the responses on this since I had been avoiding it like the plague. I thank Carolina,  Hopelight2000, and BeastInTheCave sincerely since they all helped to restore my motivation. The next update will be to honor you guys for encouraging me when I needed it most.  

I did not mean to delete the newest post *hides under rock* Q.Q This is what I get for trying to operate things via phone.

This was interesting. Nice work with it.

Ah, i see the error now. I meant to put AI and Programs used, not just AI.

Nice, I love it. Amazing design, engaging detail and rather relatable in some parts XD

Hey, dont worry. I appreciate the opinion more than you know so I can understand where and what to adjust in writing this. Its always best to keep an open mind. Thanks for the feedback. The next part should be set to release over the next couple of weeks somewhere. 

You're amazing, thank you for doing this for those who need inspiration. ^_^ This is incredible and creative!

Oh hell yes, thank you SO much

When they got to the elevator, i was like "Omgz Mia's here to murder them isnt she..." Glad that wasn't the case.

Alright, thanks so much ^^

Alright this is pretty dope, i love it. Can we use a set of playing cards instead for this? Sadly I lost my tarot deck years ago....but I know playing cards can be used as an alternative. Just not sure if it will work here. (I'd take a look to find out but i don't want to spoil the prompts for myself before getting the chance to play. ) TT^TT

Hmm.....i mean, its good. But it needs some sort of buff, like "recieve compassion". A check point maybe so the player can step back and reflect. Is there a reason you came up with a game like this? Or is it some sort of PSA...?

*sighs*

Love it, but I wish there was more Q.Q 

This was so sad. It really reminds me of a guild i ran on AK but with an outcome akin to early FFXIV. Not to mention, far less typos than I had. Love it entirely. Bravo!

Hell yeah! :D

努力を続けてください、私は信じています...！ 申し訳ありませんが、私はまさにこれと同じ苦しみを味わったことがあります。他の人にも私と同じ苦しみを味わってほしくありません。 肩が長い間痛かったのですが、処方された薬は悪化させるばかりでした。その薬は私の胃を傷めました。そして 1 か月後には右足が麻痺しました。彼らは「胸椎の巨細胞腫」を発見しました。 体の声に耳を傾けてください。私たちは誰よりも自分の体のことをよく知っています！ 🥺

This was really cute and pretty hot at the same time. Nice work ^^

Interesting.... 🤔

WOW. I love it, this is amazing and quite hot. Bravo! 💙

I thouroughly enjoyed this, thank you for making it ^_^ and their right   it works well on mobile. :D

It's Joe Biden, mind your typos. 

Anyways this problem you speak of has been an issue for years. A lot longer than any of the recent guys were in office. I don't think Biden would be the one president to suddenly talk like that, and if he did it would be both hilarious and concerning.

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Im excited, i hope it will be ready soon! (≧▽≦)

Hell yes. :) when will this be available? Count me in.

thank you! <3

umm........

I bet she would be so proud of you...I truly hope he afterlife is everything she hoped it to be. Thank you so much for sharing your story and memories of her, and you have my sympathy. I bet your incredible friendship is the best gift you have given her, because nothing in the world could ever compare.

😕

Grammar is really not that difficult.

thank you! I will reach out soon. ^_^