OMG. Vaya pedazo de Review. No sabes lo que me alegro que lo hayas disfrutado y que te hayas tomado el tiempo de darme tu feedback. Son comentarios como el tuyo los que me animan a seguir y a mejorar en cada aspecto.
Lo que dices de los modismos y jergas, lo entiendo perfectamente, y sé que puede ser cansino el personaje de Amberock en ese sentido. Sin embargo, ese era mi objetivo, ya que quería hacerlo lo más bruto, borde y desagradable posible, pero a la vez intentar conseguir que la gente empatizara con él mostrando que, a pesar de todo, tiene sus partes positivas. Amberock está inspirado en una persona muy especial de mi entorno que, a pesar de su burdez, tiene un corazón enorme.
He visto que has hecho una visual novel. En cuanto pueda, quiero apoyarte en tu proyecto y devolverte el mismo feedback que tú me has dado:D
Very sweet vn. It's true that I missed some sprites, but the editting, the catchy way you have to write and the music selection was like going in a little trip. Got a bit emotional too, since I feel a lot indentificated with Candice, and I think a lot of people too. Oh, and the scenarios reminded me a lot of Andalucia villages.
I encourage you to keep doing these stories, you have the hand and ink to do so:)
We played it with a bunch of people, and we got impressed. We love how eerie and myterious all is. We just want to continue to know what will happen.
Only thing I put a but, is that the name character could be in different colours, to make it clearer who is talking. But I understand is a stetic chocie, and it's just a picky thing.
First of all, thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts and experiences with other VNs.
However, I’m afraid this comment is a bit off-topic for this section. The reviews here are meant specifically for feedback about The Wanderer, so players can decide whether they want to try it or not.
For that reason, I’ll be removing the comment. I hope you understand, and I truly appreciate your interest.
hola! Muchísimas gracias por haber jugado y por habernos dejado un comentario:D Justo ayer estaba comentándole a mi compañero que El Paseante tiene cierta inspiración en "ESO". En la siguiente build, tu pregunta estará contestada;D
Hola! Muchísimas gracias por tu comentario y por probar el juego:D Me alegra que te haya gustado, y siento mucho que el dialecto del Paseante es algo difícil de entender. Le daré un par de vueltas para intentar hacerlo más legible:D Muchas gracias de nuevo;D
I have to say, this vn shocked me a lot, and it's a shame it is still in beta. Maybe the art is not the most atractive, but the vibes, the writting, the good choices of music and the backgrounds... It gives me Echo vibes. It gave me chills and it even cracked me a little tear.
Just a little advice: sometimes it's a bit confusing when you change the writting between past and present sentence, so I would just check on that and maybe some other typos but, as I said, you have a great story in hand and a talent to tell, so keep going;D
Simple story, but deep and very beautiful. The art is so unique it catched my eye at the first glance. This story reminded me of my grandmother who fought for cancer but, in the end, she was so exhausted she just gave up. Thanks for this work and I hope you all the best in life.
Me alegro mucho que te esté gustando. No sabes lo importante que es para mí comentarios como el tuyo, que me animan a seguir adelante con Felicity. Espero seguir a la altura con las siguientes actualizaciones. De nuevo, muchas gracias:D
Hi! Thanks for playing the game and for your comment:D
Answering your question, maybe in the future I will do some extra little stories showing more of the background of some characters. Concerning Reyald and Amberock relationship, some stories between the two will be added in the second part of Felicity, which will be a second visual novel.
Still, I think it's confusing. Even the water part, since water, to be absorbed, need your digestive system to work, but I remember Byte explaining that his digestive system is totally unoperative. The water I can pass it since it doesn't really need much to be absorbed, but medicine? Sure, it might not decay, but it wouldn't be absorbed either, so it would be unneffective. Maybe it's just because I studied biology at some point and I'm a bit picky with this but, as I said, it's really not important with all the good work it's put in in here.
I just finished act 1, and I have no words. It's true that, at first, the art style wasn't appealing to me (not because it's bad by any means, but because I enjoy more cartoonish vn), but I'm baffled at how inmersive this piece of art is.
At first, a was a bit dissapointed that there weren't too much music in it, but the more I was playing, the more I think the lack of music and the well placed sounds are the key points to make it so inmersive. Also, I think it contributes the huge amount of diferrent backgrounds images that makes you feel that you are in the world.
The characters: I love them all. I usually stop playing visual novels if I think the characters are boring or supperficial, but I can't find none of them in here. I normally have a clear favorite character in a visual novel, but here all are so good that it's hard for me to choose-.-
The writting is perfect for my taste: direct and not too much descriptive (which is a flaw I'm struggling with in my own visual novel-.-), so didn't i felt bored at any point, even in the most "silly parts".
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The only complaint I have I know it's a picky one but it's something that got me a bit confused, maybe because I didn't catch something because I'm not an english speaker but, if Alex cannot take food, how can he takes medicine? I'm pretty sure at the beginning he took some medicine for his injuries, but maybe I miss understood and he inhales it, or I missed some kind of explanation?
Noneless, 5 stars and I congratulate all the team for this amazing work;D
A huge congratz to all of you. I will find time to play it again, so I can see the finished version. This is by far my favorite visual novel, so thank you for dedicating so much effort in creating it;D
Lo siguiente que tiene que salir es la segunda parte del capítulo 6. Si todo va bien, debería estar listo para finales de Noviembre/principios de Diciembre, pero siendo el capítulo que más trabajo me está dando, no puedo asegurarlo.
