I have to say, this vn shocked me a lot, and it's a shame it is still in beta. Maybe the art is not the most atractive, but the vibes, the writting, the good choices of music and the backgrounds... It gives me Echo vibes. It gave me chills and it even cracked me a little tear.
Just a little advice: sometimes it's a bit confusing when you change the writting between past and present sentence, so I would just check on that and maybe some other typos but, as I said, you have a great story in hand and a talent to tell, so keep going;D