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He's the cutest thing ever and I need more NOWW

I'm curious what 'A fey'lana maith' meant when Aeden said it? Currently in the process of reading so if it's explained forgive me lngsl

I love it! Only, I'm curious as to what tools you have to use to decode the letter...

I love the writing so far! I've always had a thing for mermaids and all so this really appeals to me!

I liked it, the MC was funny. I liked him. I liked the game. I liked it a little less with all the fat-shaming. I get that this is an NSFW game and all. I get that this was meant to be comedic. And it was, at times. But 'Fat Jack' was not funny. The part where you steal Jack's essay to get points with Rebecca was not funny. The part where you continue to call Jack, 'Fat Jack' even after he tells you not to did not make the MC likable. It didn't make him funny. But, regardless, I tried not to think much about it. Overall, it was good. Your writing was good. However, using fat people as the brunt of jokes does not sit right with me.