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Really cool premise and world building, the interfacing with drones as a means of dystopian working conditions and risk - exasperated by out of touch corporate managers is so real. Love the diverse cast so far, love the art and sprites, Amir’s expressions are my favorite so far! Music is so great and suits it perfectly.

Very interested to see how the story continues as the VN grows in development~ Congrats on the first chapter launch, you have a lot going for the project and it’s very promising!

Inspired after reading this, gonna go solve world peace now ty <3.

.. Seriously though, fantastic and I’m blown away by the demo! I will eagerly watch this project and hope you get lots of recognition and readers eager to become instant fans!

Update 2 route choice was so crazy! Ryker’s drive to subject himself to do things is astonishing and can’t wait to read more about him.

Love this story so far, and uh the bara lizard.. =)

Lol that’s why it’s the evil red choice, he’s proclaiming it proudly that sounds fucked up D:

I’m here for Wolf and Arthur. <3

I am just now trying out this game and it's so amazing!
I like to see bigger guys like Jesse manhandle Marco, so hot and kinky :)

Impressive glimpse into an original protagonist, It's believably narrated as from someone who's disturbed from a deep trauma or close to it. I'd very much like to see more, and it's got it's hooks in good for the makings of a thrilling story.

Hmm I might need to play MH to get the context of what you mean.

Ahh that cliffhanger with Ridge, so cruel to have to wait for resolution. I want to beat up Koku's dad now

It's for replaying a non-cannon halloween event from last month, it's new with this public update

Do you think Brucie is a good pet name? Hmm I wonder if he'd knock out Zander if he dared..

Lovely music, I think you have outdone yourself on audio.

What a great introduction, I am very interested in what story you are telling. So many things to like; music, character art, unique magic, and the world building behind it all! The mystery of the protagonist's past and the finer details of what Zhangken observes really keep being in his head interesting.

I did the sparring with him and I also wouldn't mind losing. ;D That CG was my favorite.

I didn't have the demo installed but I must have a bugged save with a messed up night cycle, loading a game automatically sends me to bed and locks the controls

Having fun with it so far, the boar smith is so hot!

Your health is more important than updates, don't feel bad  for taking care of yourself

I loved the waterfall date with Ridge so much. It was a little bittersweet to end on such a tender moment, he deserves more hugs.

He's a snake, he tries to get the mc to doubt his feelings out of jealousy

Excited to see the new Waterfall update. <3

Oh no...I want Fen to bully me more

Damn good chapter of the story, we learned so much about the cascade and Alex. You are quite a versatile writer, what a roller coaster of emotions that was! I love how you left it off but still enthralled with what is in-store for Soulcreek.

jesus

They're all such handsome monsters, worth getting banned over that dragon d*ck.
Also Ridge has me melting with that fucking smirk of his and his theme so fits his personality!

Just finished playing this release on the app! Went super smooth and your writing is so tantalizing, and the themes are just right up my ally! ;D
Thank you for sharing your release on here! I thoroughly enjoyed a few replays already and I look forward to seeing more of your work here! Demons Within is one of my favorites between your writing and Blaines character art.  <3

Yea, you should play. You'd be right at home in Echo. There's this nice forest you could set up a trailer and make some likeminded neighbors. Maybe even a nice bear bestie friend!

The influence wheel is so cool, I can't wait to see how you expand on the different outcomes or bad endings? ;)

Some of those endings were so touching, I loved playing it