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Love this story so far, and uh the bara lizard.. =)

Lol that’s why it’s the evil red choice, he’s proclaiming it proudly that sounds fucked up D:

Wow, scene 3 is perfect. Public Dom/sub degrading

Mmm Maik is such a daddy :}

I’m here for Wolf and Arthur. <3

I am just now trying out this game and it's so amazing!
I like to see bigger guys like Jesse manhandle Marco, so hot and kinky :)

Impressive glimpse into an original protagonist, It's believably narrated as from someone who's disturbed from a deep trauma or close to it. I'd very much like to see more, and it's got it's hooks in good for the makings of a thrilling story.

Holy shit, they're gonna need so much therapy

Well that certainly escalated, I'm shook at the last part of the VN : Edited for spoilers

Hmm I might need to play MH to get the context of what you mean.

Ahh that cliffhanger with Ridge, so cruel to have to wait for resolution. I want to beat up Koku's dad now

It's for replaying a non-cannon halloween event from last month, it's new with this public update

Do you think Brucie is a good pet name? Hmm I wonder if he'd knock out Zander if he dared..

Lovely music, I think you have outdone yourself on audio.

What a great introduction, I am very interested in what story you are telling. So many things to like; music, character art, unique magic, and the world building behind it all! The mystery of the protagonist's past and the finer details of what Zhangken observes really keep being in his head interesting.

I loved the nsfw beach scenes on my original playthrough but didn't recruit Pheonix after starting over after losing my saves. Damnnnit
I wish we didn't have to have Pheonix for the beach party. ;_;

You guys write such a broad amount of good content, so I'm grateful for what you've graced us with. If I could suggest maybe adding a warning to the option to turn him down will lose out of future scenes.

I know, I know some consequences should arise from choices but this one I feel deserves a bit of attention in the future, even Bradley still has a text inviting you to a beach party that he will talk about even without Pheonix. Fans are missing out by not recruiting Pheonix!
Thank you, I look forward to future releases and I appreciate every scene I get with my sexy lizard crew mates especially!

I did the sparring with him and I also wouldn't mind losing. ;D That CG was my favorite.

I didn't have the demo installed but I must have a bugged save with a messed up night cycle, loading a game automatically sends me to bed and locks the controls

Having fun with it so far, the boar smith is so hot!

Your health is more important than updates, don't feel bad  for taking care of yourself

I loved the waterfall date with Ridge so much. It was a little bittersweet to end on such a tender moment, he deserves more hugs.

He's a snake, he tries to get the mc to doubt his feelings out of jealousy

Excited to see the new Waterfall update. <3

Oh no...I want Fen to bully me more

Damn good chapter of the story, we learned so much about the cascade and Alex. You are quite a versatile writer, what a roller coaster of emotions that was! I love how you left it off but still enthralled with what is in-store for Soulcreek.

jesus

They're all such handsome monsters, worth getting banned over that dragon d*ck.
Also Ridge has me melting with that fucking smirk of his and his theme fits his personality!

I like the idea of Asterion being a top choice if you make choices being submissive, losing the wrestling match in his labyrinth etc. Generally being more assertive after winning their contest sortof if the MC is turned on by being pinned by him.

Asterion seems like he would be teased pretty easily! MC could probably play with his horns while kissing maybe?

For the player character,  Asteron teasing could be dependent on how the two interact with each-other. I would appreciate more soft mooing in ears.

Sauna project sounds like a good idea for NSFW, or you could add more locker-room shenanigans.

I don't usually do dominant approaches in VN's  as I don't relate to that.

I'd like to see Asterion picking up MC maybe, holding him against a wall and holding his hands above his head/pinned, anything strength related that shows how much bigger/strong he is and indulging his warrior side like the MC mentions at different moments.

I think Asterion would be really into deep kissing during nsfw obviously, maybe getting his ears played with or licked. Pleasuring MC as a lover, rimming if he's into it or in general just tasting him.

The MC is a whore, what do you think? ;)

Just finished playing this release on the app! Went super smooth and your writing is so tantalizing, and the themes are just right up my ally! ;D
Thank you for sharing your release on here! I thoroughly enjoyed a few replays already and I look forward to seeing more of your work here! Demons Within is one of my favorites between your writing and Blaines character art.  <3

Unfortunately the game version the app installs seems to be a very early build.

Damn this one hits hard, bravo.

Yea, you should play. You'd be right at home in Echo. There's this nice forest you could set up a trailer and make some likeminded neighbors. Maybe even a nice bear bestie friend!

The influence wheel is so cool, I can't wait to see how you expand on the different outcomes or bad endings? ;)