I wish it had a tutorial or more guidance. I did really like the art and it was impressive how much went into the concept. Keep it up!
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Like the premise a lot! it took me a sec to figure out how to progress but I managed eventually.
Unrelated note:Did you know your game technically violates the Geneva Convetion? It's actually super common for developers and even tv show producers to accidentally do war crimes. Basically, red cross bad, copyrighted and protected by international law. Green cross okay.
https://www.reddit.com/r/gamedev/comments/11908jv/psa_do_not_use_the_red_cross_i...
It's very well done, amazing visuals, I will be using this game as an example of "juice" whenver explaining it to new developers. I am having a hard time believing it was made during the jam though, given that it doesn't fit the theme at all... The theme is there at least partially to limit start times
The opening was so cute! I love the art and music! I def got scammed too much. Very fun, very good. The ONLY improvement I'd suggest is: Please anchor your text. Text that appears character by character shouldn't shift the whole textbox to the left. it makes it very hard to read until its done typing.
Very chill, very relaxing and decently smart AI. This is an amazing implementation of a very simple idea and it feels cozy. It's hard to find something to improve upon, you have a good amount of feeback in your UI and a very cohesive style, but I guess you could lean into the UI feedback even more. Text that moves in with your character for example, or more stylized text boxes. Maybe some more character personality? Make them more characters rather than difficulty levels. There really isn't much to imropove on, this is fantastic.
Congratulations on your first jam game. Everyone who submitted, ESPECIALLY first timers should be proud they finished something. It's an important step, but you submitted something beautiful. You have amazing art and story, something that not anyone can replicate. It's a rough market for visual novel style games but you did well, especially for your first time.



