Huge fan! The ending really got me, the swith from "mostly black & white with the occasional color" to "full colors" was such a genius was to signal "no shit's ok now actually"
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When the Symbolism Hits 👌👌👌 yeah, that was very relatable. I do very much enjoy the hopeful note at the end though. Things are hard, but we gotta keep going forward.
On a technical standpoint, I also gotta applaud the way this was put together. I was unaware you could achieve such pseudo-3D with bitsy, and it was pulled off masterfully.
To quote the rules of the jam
Fictional or nonhuman intersex variants are allowed, so long as they function in parallel to human intersex variants.
For example, "a 30-meter tall hyena monster with dual fully functional genital sets" would not match the focus of this jam.
"A 30-meter tall hyena monster who has a biological sex trait variant that does not align with the standards of giant hyena monster society" would match the focus of this jam.
So your character is allowed so long as he is intersex by the standards of his specie, and that information is conveyed to the reader/player somehow.
If you want to look it up, the equivalent for humans from what you're describing would either be Swyer's Syndrome (apparent female phenotype despite having XY chromosomes) orDe La Chapelle Syndrome (apparent male phenotype despite having XX chromosomes)
While directed primarily at alterhumans, I find this zine to be a real treasure trove of resources regarding speculative biology, conlanguing, and other worldbuilding tips. The zine walks the reader through various aspects of a world and asks what that may imply about the rest, WHILE also giving out recommendations of books about language or anthropology or biology or whatever else to help you. Def a rec!
hi! I saw on the Very Queer March bundle description that this story features an intersex character. I just wanted to double check, this is an intersex character as in "has sex characteristics outside of the expected norms," right? (Sorry for askning, but I have seen so many books using the word "intersex" when what they actually mean is either "non-binary" or "bigenital" so i have to check ^^)
Update: to anyone wanting to get this game,I have written a longer review over there (tl;dr: it's good, get it!)
I'd already played the demo ages ago, and now I am back for the full version! I only played about half an hour, but the game is very charming so far. The "magic" aesthetic is quite banger. The way it plays reminds me a lot of the old school zoo tycoon games. The game is easy to understand mechanically. I didn't fuck around too much yet, but I'm sure it'll be lots of fun. I also appreciate that there is a whole tab to check which visitor is unhappy/how your workers are doing/which animal is unhappy, it's WAY easier to navigate than most zoo sims.
I wiiiiill say I hope the UI is improved in the future (the buttons are very big, which is especially noticeable because some of the text is very small. Mostly the button size though. When I was doing the tutorial I had a hard time figuring out what was on the screen cuz the UI + tutorial popup blocked most of what was happening.)
Anyways, great work! Big fan!
Amazing zine! Tho I do need to point out a small error in it: you mention "intersexuality in spotted hyenas." Spotted hyenas aren't inherently intersex, because intersexuality means a deviation from common sex phenotypes (so no species is inherently intersex :p there are plenty of intersex creatures in nature tho! Like those hens turning into roosters, or that one lioness that spontaneously grew a mane.) A lot of people use the word "intersex" incorrectly, so it's important to be accurate when using it so as to avoid spreading misinformation :3 I'm gonna link you this curated collection of intersex works in case you want to read more on the topic ^^
A really cool exploration of how scary relationships can be when one has an unusual body, & how to cope with that. I liked it!
(ps: I believe there's a typo when Intravenous talks about how they learned they were intersex with Suture, I think you meant "neither of us knew" rather than "niether of us knew" ?)
Prae Obscura is extremely good at surreal worldbuildings & memorable characters, and the painted city features both in spades. As I am writing this review, the game does not yet contains any art, which frankly emphasizes the feeling of the setting to a delicious degree. Do I know what the characters are seeing? Not quite. Can I feel it? Oh, yes, I can.
The depiction of the protagonist's intersexness, and how it affects their journey, from the desire to get their rightful body back to the difficulties of undergoing such a difficult journey as someone frequently subject to adrenal crisis, is so fucking cool and real. That's a real person right here with personal history and desires and opinions on things, who also happens to have intersexuality be a huge part of their life. It owns.
The end of the game hit me like a ton of bricks. It's layered with so many meanings. The use of the video game format to emphasizes the illusion of choices, the removal of agency, the cyclicity of it all is just... chief fucking kiss. Someone will fix this one day (break you out of the time loop) (get god some fucking rest) (stop rampant & systematic IGM) someone will fix this one day. But I'm sorry. Today is not that day.
Anyways I love Curio Curio is now my best friend we are GETTING some medecine for the dog.
Hello! I am doing a list of intersex media. Just checking: does your story feature an intersex character (as in, someone who has traits outside of sex norms) or a futanari one?









































