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Alright, I have to hand it to you, you also have a hell of an ear for the music. The music just fits, perfectly for each part of the story. I can only imagine how many songs you have had to listen to to find just that right one.

Not only that, I am floored at the way that you write compelling story and dialog. The characters are growing organically, with no sudden jumps or monumental leaps into a change of personality. Everything stems from how they are interacting with each other and the world itself.

This is a game where I could see myself playing, even if you dropped the “A” from “AVN”.

I am usually an impatient person, wanting more and more, faster and faster. I know that there are many (MANY) just like that, wanting you to work faster, and release more frequently.

My advice is to ignore that pressure. Keep doing what you are doing, because it’s working. I would take waiting several months for another wonderful chapter over a rushed job that degrades the quality of the game. Don’t compromise your artistic integrity just for a quick turnaround.

Thank you (and your other contributors) for a wonderful chapter…yet again.

I wish I could pop into Patreon and sub at Demon Lord, but I am positive my wife would kill me :D.

If you need any coding help (and it isn’t immediately urgent, I’m not always looking there), hit me up on f95zone (same name). I may be new to Ren’Py (and am not that fond of python in general), but I love to talk shop, and would be happy to chat software dev.

FYI, you are making it damn impossible to choose my favorite character. Every chapter seems to change my mind and want to pick a different favorite. At the moment it is sitting between Nova and Luna, with Nova having the slight edge.

Started playing, and the story seems interesting, but I have one concern.

It is near impossible to tell what is a thought vs what is being spoken out loud. There are no cues in the text to make that differentiation.

It may be worth it to use a method other visual novel authors have, and put thoughts in parentheses:

(Character thoughts)

Then you can leave normal dialog without any special markers:

Normal dialog

I think it would make the story a lot easier to understand, and more enjoyable.

Overall I am interested in continuing the story (just barely started), but I wanted to make this comment while it was fresh in my mind. I am looking forward to the rest of the story lines!

Another magnificent story where the sex does not detract from the plot.

I thoroughly enjoyed the narrative, and was pleased that the sex scenes were (almost) all unforced. They flowed naturally with the story line, and made sense per character.

Thank you for making such a wonderful game, it is clearly a labor of love (double entendre intended).

I look forward to the next chapters!

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You have managed to make a game that has an awesome story beyond the sex. I would play this game without the adult content. Looking forward to the next episode!