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you've prologue episode 1 to 7 and chapter 1 episode 1 to 4

Well, the MC is just more mature than you... When he opened the door, it was more than his previous bullying that did matter, they were entrusted the house by Klara and she was the one who decided to have more tenants (at least, that's what he knew). Being able to put your personal grudge away to avoid bad consequences for someone you respect is just being mature.

As he thought, we was over that whole bullying matter, his main concern was that these girls could start bullying him again (which they didn't).

When Aine explained herself, she was clearly repentant (from what he heard) and distressed. He just behaved as a decent human being... Also, even if he said that he had forgotten about both the bullying and his feeling for Aine, it's clear that the feelings were still  partially there... for example, from the patting to comfort her. Even if he says "muscle memory", it's clearly not. Even if some women do you serious wrong and you got seriously hurt, if you truly loved her, it won't fully go away.

Did Aine desserve punishment ? Probably. Did Emma desserve punishment ? from what we (readers) learn, probably not. But does that means that punishment has to fall on them ? The harsh past of Aine is in itself some kind of punishment !!!

I just started it and got hooked... I saw your comment when googling for the patreon

Itch has 3 choices : free without tip, free with OPTIONAL tip and paid...

With the Collective Shout/Credit card issue, itch had to deindex all AVN then reindexed those who are only Free with no optional tip (as these don't allow any interaction with Paypal/Credit Card/...)

Until the whole issue is fully solved, the authors who want to be reindexed on itch have to switch to Free without the "tip" option... and use other services in order to be supported (Patreon for example).

You have other AVN who did the same (remove the optional tip to be reindexed).

I think that it's said that the phone automatically warns the emergency contact even if it's screen is broken.

It would means that Lucy was the one calling the hospital after getting the emergency notification.

problem is that if you are colorblind (like I'm), you don't see these changes

Some more visible changes could help.

The fact is that there are no dialogue during that part... [spoiler]Only unreadable garbage for pages and pages, intentionnally unreadable[/spoiler]

Yuri ending It should really be shortened, it is so long that I thought that the game was crashed for good... (from internet, seems like there is some color change... can't see it because I've some slight color-blindness in the red-green-yellow-brown range of colors).

The payment processors didn't act on their own, they answered to mails from a pressure group (the same that went to try to censure GTA,...)

The best thing to do is to organise massive movements of Mailing to card processors (Visa and Mastercard) and to Paypal, asking them to stop pushing to censor LEGAL contents.

Anti-censorship people are probably many more than those trying to censor. But they usually keep silent so the only voice the card processor hear are pro-censorship groups.

They won't stop at the rape/incest game... they'll target more and more contents... Each victory they get will embolden them... If we don't act, it's the whole adult scene that'll disappear, including games deemed too violent (not only those with sexual contents).

Excellent game.

I've seen way to many AVN who forget the Visual Novel part and have an empty story line vaguely present between adult scenes.

This is clearly not the case. You could remove the adult scenes and you'd still get an amazing story to read. This is clearly what an AVN should be.

The only minus point is the fact that one single incorrect choice can bring you out of one of the girls's path... which can happen a lot of the time. It can be understood for some choice but the other should have be more a matter of "reputation score" in order to allow a few "incorrect answers"

I don't really like the subscription model of Patreon so I'll do a one time payment here (on itch) and I plan to do the same for Eternum when it'll be completed (story is also amazing).

Keep the good work.