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Ahh, it is the highest compliment to have an idea worthy of inspiring a little jealously!

Thank you for the feedback! This gives me some specific things that I can action on the graphic design front, which is something I'll be working on now!

Thank you for this lovely feedback!

I absolutely agree that this will (perhaps only) appeal to a certain type of Warden, and that's fine for what this Trifold is trying to accomplish.

I am not entirely sure what 'Bungie's Marathon's AI Agents' refers to (apologies if I'm missing an obvious reference!) - but I absolutely agree that the Meta-abstract vs the in-fiction aspect do seem to be a little at odds with each other - and I'll try to address that in the revision!

Thank you for the offer! (fellow Leviathan!)

What  I am likely to do is make some changes based on the existing feedback, would you be willing to give feedback on a revised version if I can send it to you? 

Thank you!

I definitely take the points around not wanting to juggle additional mechanics, and it means a lot to me that you'd consider adding the table to your Warden Screen! I'd be really interested to hear if it leads into any interesting interactions in play!

Thank you, this is high praise! 

I also recognise the concerns raised has been pretty consistent, so my next iteration will definitely look at avoiding give the Warden an extra number to track. It might be much easier to just have players roll using their existing stress scores - in which case this just becomes a more introspective panic check system ^-^ 

Thank you for this response - all feedback is helpful!

Thank you for the detailed response! 

I will be sure to check out the series you've recommended - at a glance, it's interesting to me that each "terror" appears to have their own pamphlet - it's encouraging to think this pamphlet could possibly be split into three to potentially give each much more depth.

I also appreciate the parallel drawn to Negative Space - this is something that I might emphasize more in a future revision of this work! 

The graphic design is also something I'm happy to expand on. For context, this was made about 48 hours before the deadline with just Google Docs (I joined late - but had a flash of inspiration that I wanted to share!). Now that I have the "bones" of the work in place, I feel a lot more confident bringing the aesthetics up - particularly after being inspired by many works in this jam!

Thank you for your feedback, both here and on Discord! I did make the art - it's nice to find a project / niche that matches my specific style!

I will certainly be doing a revised draft after the jam!

Thank you for the feedback!

Can I ask what you are referring to is to similar? (I'd assume Pandora and Temperance...?)  Or you might have meant that some of the questions are too similar? 

In either case, happy to do some revisions!

Great job on submitting, not bad! 

I wish the mobs moved a bit quicker as it doesn't feel like there's much to do between rounds (but it does work as an idle-ish game) 

A cool exploration of the reverse theme! 

Very cool!

Thank you! :D

Hey!

Just want you to know that I went through all the submissions for the TTRPG for Trans Rights bundle by hand, and this was my standout no. 1 pick.  Absolutely stunned that this doesn't have more attention on it!

I'll take that as a compliment! Thank you :D