A little late comment, but I absolutely love the story. There are a few mistakes here and there, but it’s very… not sure how to express this, unique? atmospheric?
The (what I’m pretty sure) retrospections with the spirit blobs where the story gets a bit more poetic are really a great addition.
And the ending illustration is super duper cute@@!!!
The Sekibanki seemed a little thrown in there out of the blue, but I enjoyed the it nonetheless.
You’ve also made me fall in love with a ship that I’ve never thought of before.
In early stages of the game you could actually call anyone at anytime, but the dialogues were generic and didn’t necessarily fit the characters’ personalities (and I wouldn’t have enough time to create personalized dialogues for everyone(◡ , ◡)), so I left them out.
