A little late comment, but I absolutely love the story. There are a few mistakes here and there, but it’s very… not sure how to express this, unique? atmospheric?
The (what I’m pretty sure) retrospections with the spirit blobs where the story gets a bit more poetic are really a great addition. And the ending illustration is super duper cute@@!!!
The Sekibanki seemed a little thrown in there out of the blue, but I enjoyed the it nonetheless.
You’ve also made me fall in love with a ship that I’ve never thought of before.