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I'm glad I could read this till the end, it's been a spectacular journey!

Here are my thoughts thus far!.. Fantastic art work has been done, I do like the character designs and setting a lot, I think the writing for the first half wasn't doing a good service, as in following a similar storybeat(RYT and Soulcreek connection) to that extent wasn't a good choice to make a first impression. Otherwise, the ladder half definitely improved the story, a drinking game to get to know the characters was a brilliant idea, we got a lot of perspective on what the characters are like in one simple scene. But yeah, my take is that this has really high potential to be good with more polish added onto it!

I'm glad to see the English has significantly improved this chapter.

Thank you for continuing this hidden gem, see you next Chapter! =D

I love this!
-Rocco being protective of Cody was super adorable and talkative like a husky would be.
-Cody almost fades into the background, you almost forget he's there, poor raccoon. 😭
-Arthur I didn't notice how vibrant he was until I tried to learn a bit more about him (despite there being so little to know right now haha! )
-Sean has a great fashion sense! It's incredible that his choices can be either incredibly forceful or relaxed when he wants to be.
Hope you guys continue, was a fun read!

I like it! It really embodies the idea that it's about the journey not the destination. 

Chad's definitely topping.

In seriousness that was a really good read, it's always nice to have something I can relate this much to on a personal level. Not enough media touches on the implications that domestic violence can have, your feeling of helplessness like you're being trapped. Unconditional love is hard to reciprocate when you go through something like that, and I so badly wanted to tell Chad it's not his fault. You feel confused and unsure on how to handle positive people, to the point you self-sabotage and outburst without knowing why. Chad's an awesome protagonist I genuinely could connect with how he felt, and I'm glad I could read his story unfold. I really do hope you continue Home Zomewhere Else it's a hidden gem that I'm glad I read till the end. Will be sure to recommend to anyone willing to read.

It was incredibly interesting, I loved this short story. Really wholesome and sweet <3

Well I had only done Blake's route to understand what the commotion was about. After reading it, I thought the overarching story was okay, it felt like a slow burn mostly. Here's to hoping the pay off will be well worth it 💖

Hype 💖

Yeah I think I do need help! I'm simply unsure which choices would lead to Fenrad's CG as no options seem to change the outcome. Thank you, I really enjoyed Clawed Connections!

Hi there, I'm pretty confused! How come the CGs are only in the files but haven't been implemented to the novel?

Classy. Looks good

I was pleasantly surprised, this novel was exactly something I was looking for and it's good too! Rangativurk's demeanor is just so funny to me I can't help but want to tease him a little. One thing I do hope is revealed in later chapters is how powerful a single Champion class adventurer is (Unless you mean to tell me Guildmaster Arxel is one I wouldn't doubt that). I'd imagine it doesn't compare to Rang's prime, but it'd be a fun comparison nonetheless. Also this line here had me dying laughing I had to share:
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Wow, this novel is going to be something truly special. I thoroughly enjoyed what I played from the Demo, will be sure to recommend this to those who want a read.

I'm disappointed our MC doesn't tell his Dad he loves him in the Mark route, I felt that was one of the sweetest moments in Gil route. It really shows how being around other people can effect your attitude 

Update: Okay, I'm actually starting to like Mark a lot

Too much attention focused towards putting MC and Mark together, like guys I get it if you want me to suck cat dick then don't even give me the option to romance somebody else for gods sake.